Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Sign Inventory 1 Week 9


Antipsalm

Disfigure me, Lord. Take pity on me.
Cover me with bumps. Reward me with boils.
In the fount of tears open a spring of pus mixed with blood.
Twist my mouth upside down. Give me a hump. Make me crooked.
Let moles burrow through my flesh. Let blood
circle my body. Let it be thus.
May all that breathes steal breath from me,
all that drinks quench its thirst in my cup.
Turn all vermin upon me.
Let my enemies gather around me
and rejoice, honoring You.

Disfigure me, Lord. Take pity on me.
Tie every guilt around my ankles.
Make me deaf with noise and delirium. Uphold me
above every tragedy.
Overpower me with dread and insomnia. Tear me up.
Open the seven seals, let out the seven beasts.
Let each one graze my monstrous brain.
Set upon me every evil, every suffering,
every misery. Every time you threaten,
point your finger at me. Thus, thus, my Lord.
let my enemies gather around me
and rejoice, honoring You.

                                   Novica Tadic

-Biblical language.
-No rhyme scheme.
-Repetition of “all” in the first stanza.
-and repetition of “let” found throughout.
-Repetition of “seven” and use of alliteration in the 6th line of the 2nd stanza.
-Repetition of first and last line in both stanzas.
-Repetition of “every” in lines 8 and 9 in 2nd stanza

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