Response to Tim's "Improv 2 Week 7"
Not lame. There are some striking moments that showcase your talent well, like: “They hate to be alone, / like a running faucet,” “the kitten’s electric fur,” and “Oh fatherless neighborhood / wards." Really unlikely descriptions that are able to be readily associated with these "kitten's." On to the next... I think there may be a “y” missing in line eleven. While that line is being addressed, personally, it made me cringe. I believe that response occurred because it is somewhat expected; the hugging of kittens. However, the following line offers something that could really be played off of. What if the kitten was sick? What if this so called sickness was paired with the description of the kittens purr, because really, they sound as if they have a flap mistakenly hinged in their throat door or overgrown Thyroid Cartilage or something.
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