Response to Jenna's "Week Seven - Free Write"
"I dreamt I was a flying, fire-breathing foam stegosaurus screwing mops of liquid flight into racks of Japanese films that destroy grandmothers." I have no idea how this particular line was created but it was by far the line that I liked the most. I believe it's because it is so very unlikely to pair those things together and that makes it extremely interesting. The line that was chosen for the recursive method is one of full language to big with. Kudos to you for choosing that one. However, all of that heavy language together seems like too much, but the format that it's in right now may has some play in that. I believe the purpose of the recursive exercise was inform us of another way to generate ideas and language, and eventually drafts. If this were my project I would take back what I deem to be most interesting and re-write. Oh, and I would use the line I shared above. (:
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